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"Soul Searching" by miss_impetuous

Category: Poetry

Tags: Poetry, Free form writing, emotional

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Soul Searching


The nightmare of memories that cannot be forgot

Silently swaying in the webs of our souls

The last remnants of an untold confession

Forever too late;

Forever inadequate.


Emptiness echoes through the soul,

Complete and utter desolation

Runs through ravaged veins

Crumbling the walls of reality.

Left wondering if the meaning of life is death.


Unaware of incompleteness

We are left looking into the shattered mirror of lies

Shadows surrounding the answers we never received

For we chose not to question;

But truth is not without consequence.


Havoc is a game we play in life

In death we realise we are all losers

Torn apart by love’s heartless fingers.

Defenceless and without hope

Gifted the sudden realisation of failure.


Confusion crashes through the mind

Burning the pages of sanity;

Shameless destruction of all that is truth.

What is left

Is Me.



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Category Name: My Thoughts

I didn’t care for this poem at all. It lacked originality, purpose, good word choice, or was otherwise uninteresting. This poem was okay. It would have been better if the poet had given the theme, word choice, or form more careful thought. This poem was great. The form and word choice seemed natural and added to the main idea the poet was putting across.

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Category Name: Theme / Subject Matter

The poet does little to make the theme or subject matter seem important to me. There are some cool things about the way the theme or subject matter is handled, but it could use more originality or clarity. The poem makes the subject matter new and exciting. Even if the subject matter is ordinary, the poet gives it a new angle.

Is the subject or theme poetry “worthy?” Is it original? Is the subject treated in such a way that makes it interesting, funny, creative, beautiful, surprising, enlightening or otherwise worthwhile? Ordinary subjects make for great poetry if they are treated in an original way, and great subjects make for bad poetry if they are just like every other poem written about it.

Category Name: Word Choice

The words chosen for this poem are dull, contrived, or hastily chosen. The words seem almost right, but there may be some wrenching or some words that don’t quite fit into the overall idea. The words choice is great. The words seem exactly right to convey the theme. They are beautifully or creatively chosen, surprising or exciting.

Poetry is language in its most concentrated form. More so than in any other type of literature, this requires the poet to carefully choose each word. Do the words chosen convey a specific intention, feeling or purpose? Do they feel deliberate but natural, or do the feel forced, awkward, or hasty?

Category Name: Form & Structure

This poem seemed spewed onto the page without any thought given to form of any kind. The poem has been thought out, but doesn’t quite fit the form or seems a little forced or unnatural in some places. The poem naturally conforms to the form, or the free verse takes meter, enjambment, etc. into consideration in an effective way.

Form is the defining structure of a genre or type. Does the poem follow a predefined form (sonnet, haiku, villanelle, ballad, etc)? If so, does it conform to the rules of the form (meter, rhyme, syllable count, etc)? If the poem does not follow a form, does it make sense not to? Is there something that differentiates the poem from prose?

Category Name: Mechanics

The poet seems to have taken little or no thought for the punctuation in this poem. The poet has some really interesting things going on with the punctuation or line length, but it could be more exciting or surprising, or it could be scaled back to be less distracting. The punctuation compliments and adds to the meaning of the poem’s words or theme. It is deliberate and well thought out.

Punctuation (or lack there of), line breaks, enjambment, capitalization, lineation, etc. Not everyone can be e.e. cummings and eschew all punctuation and convention of line, but poetry doesn’t always need to follow strict grammar rules either, as long as whatever punctuation is or is not used adds to the overall idea of the poem.

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1. Soul Searching

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3. The nightmare of memories that cannot be forgot

4. Silently swaying in the webs of our souls

5. The last remnants of an untold confession

6. Forever too late;

7. Forever inadequate.

8.

9. Emptiness echoes through the soul,

10. Complete and utter desolation

11. Runs through ravaged veins

12. Crumbling the walls of reality.

13. Left wondering if the meaning of life is death.

14.

15. Unaware of incompleteness

16. We are left looking into the shattered mirror of lies

17. Shadows surrounding the answers we never received

18. For we chose not to question;

19. But truth is not without consequence.

20.

21. Havoc is a game we play in life

22. In death we realise we are all losers

23. Torn apart by love’s heartless fingers.

24. Defenceless and without hope

25. Gifted the sudden realisation of failure.

26.

27. Confusion crashes through the mind

28. Burning the pages of sanity;

29. Shameless destruction of all that is truth.

30. What is left

31. Is Me.

32.

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