Hello There
Tags: Newbie

New writer from Texas here. This is a great site ,so I'm just going to jump in and submit what little I have . Just getting started reading everything.

I took a class last year ,our teacher was a great childrens writer. Oh those workshopping days were fun and yet angst at the same time.

Anyway, hope ya'll like what I have. Thanks!

Welcome Rhonda! If you catch one of mine, I'll return the favor for anything you put public.

I uploaded a chapter

And I reviewed it for you. I hope my comments help. I can get picky sometimes, but don't worry, that means there are not a lot of huge issues!

and take my comments with a grain of salt, please. Only you know where you are trying to go with your work

Thanks for the review. You are very helpful! Sometimes I dont know where to make new paragraphs.